The Critics

Nutjobber said…
My life is a dank pit of darkness from which there is no escape but for the encouraging thoughts of suicide…and though self-mutilation is most certainly in my future, have you guys seen the new HP laptop?

It’s crazy awesome!

Veronica said…
Oh my fucking god.

She writes alot, but doesn’t really say anything. I am having a really hard time reading rather than skimming.

mistercrowley
said…
xBox, dude, this isn’t half as bad as what I used to write at some point, many years ago. Then I read some Sylvia Plath and realised that maybe there was a reason she killed herself.

prayingtodarwin said…
This is the funniest blog I’ve read all week!!! Wait, what do you mean it’s not a humor blog? Then why am I laughing so hard???

Averal: I am going to hide in my dark pit of darkness right about now.


AVERRAL writes under pen name Scarlet Risqué. She stars in Scarlet Queen YouTube with over a million views. She holds a degree in business. The RED HOURGLASS is ranked Top 50 Espionage Thriller on Amazon. She is currently writing the sequels to the Hourglass Series. Grab a free copy of her novel now RED HOURGLASS on Amazon
Learn about secrets to flawless make-up free skin at DR Secret

5 Comments

  1. I will only say this.
    Those who fly high in the skies looks small to those who crawl on the ground.

  2. No sweetie, you know what you need to do? You need to take some of the advice on board and listen to what was said.

    As it is, your writing is very hard to read and we don’t get to know anything about you. Also while your blog design is lovely and minimalistic, having only 1 post to a page is very hard to navigate. Surely in your settings you could change it to 8-10 posts on the front page? That would make getting some idea of you much easier.

  3. 8 – 10 posts per page will be very messy, trust me, i tried and it went haywire.

    I am trying out ways to improve the navigation… give me some time 🙂

    Thank you for your kind comments although ^^

  4. If you have a look there are plenty of good blog templates where 8-10 posts per page won’t look messy. Maybe this template just isn’t going to work.

    People are lazy, they want to be able to read without having to click. If you make them click, they won’t hang around.

  5. Oh and comment moderation for every comment just looks nasty too, like you think you are superior. Try having moderation for just the first time a person comments.

Submit a Comment

Or